This reminded me of a police officer in my story "Administrative Leave" (Ellery Queen, Sept./Oct. 2010). He is at home after an officer-involved shooting in which he killed a young man. As he stares out his bedroom window, a strange man standing in his backyard stares back. Feeling trapped and frozen, the police officer watches the events unfold.
He pulls a cell phone from his left pocket. His right hand stays hidden. He punches the keys with his thumb, never taking his eyes off me. The phone on the table on Lorraine’s side of the bed rings. My head snaps instinctively at the sound. I turn back to the man and he smiles. He knows he’s got the right number.
I hope your week ahead provides you with plenty of options to take charge of your destiny.
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Wow! This is very suspenseful, and we can't wait to see what transpires. The man in the yard seems very cagey, and we hope the cop is up to coping with him. Always good when we root for the protag.
ReplyDeleteOh Audrey, that is a superb passage! Now I must go find the story.
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